Nice! Keep at it. I like the art style, it's unique to any online strip I've seen. Also, that's good to know about the coffee.
Dialogue is hard. Punchy dialogue is very hard. Punchy dialogue that fits in a word balloon is damn nigh impossible to get right the first time. One tip I've heard is to approach it like writing song lyrics which don't rhyme.
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Date: 2007-07-13 02:50 pm (UTC)Dialogue is hard. Punchy dialogue is very hard. Punchy dialogue that fits in a word balloon is damn nigh impossible to get right the first time. One tip I've heard is to approach it like writing song lyrics which don't rhyme.